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Writing Assignment- Too funny...

Discussion in 'General Chat' started by Candace, May 23, 2010.

  1. Candace

    Candace Kept Woman Supporting Member

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    Writing Assignment

    The professor told his class one day, 'Today we will experiment with a new form called the tandem story. The process is simple. Each person will pair off with the person sitting to his or her immediate right. As homework tonight, one of you will write the first paragraph of a short story. You will e-mail your partner that paragraph and send another copy to me. The partner will read the first paragraph and then add another paragraph to the story and send it back, also sending another copy to me. The first person will then add a third paragraph, and so on back-and-forth. Remember to re-read what has been written each time in order to keep the story coherent. There is to be absolutely NO talking outside of the e-mails and anything you wish to say must be written in the e-mail. The story is over when both agree a conclusion has been reached.'

    The following was actually turned in by two of his English students: Rebecca and Gary.

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    THE STORY

    (first paragraph by Rebecca)

    At first, Laurie couldn't decide which kind of tea she wanted. The chamomile, which used to be her favorite for lazy evenings at home, now reminded her too much of Carl, who once said, in happier times, that he liked chamomile. But she felt she must now, at all costs, keep her mind off Carl. His possessiveness was suffocating, and if she thought about him too much her asthma started acting up again. So chamomile was out of the question.


    (second paragraph by Gary )

    Meanwhile, Advance Sergeant Carl Harris, leader of the attack squadron now in orbit over Skylon 4, had more important things to think about than the neuroses of an air-headed asthmatic bimbo named Laurie with whom he had spent one sweaty night over a year ago. 'A.S. Harris to Geostation 17,' he said into his transgalactic communicator. 'Polar orbitestablished. No sign of resistance so far...' But before he could sign off a bluish particle beam flashed out of nowhere and blasted a hole through his ship's cargo bay. The jolt from the direct hit sent him flying out of his seat and across the cockpit.


    (Rebecca)

    He bumped his head and died almost immediately, but not before he felt one last pang of regret for psychically brutalizing the one woman who had ever had feelings for him. Soon afterwards, Earth stopped its pointless hostilities towards the peaceful farmers of Skylon 4. 'Congress Passes Law Permanently Abolishing War and Space Travel,' Laurie read in her newspaper one morning. The news simultaneously excited her and bored her. She stared out the window, dreaming of her youth, when the days had passed unhurriedly and carefree, with no newspaper to read, no television to distract her from her sense of innocent wonder at all the beautiful things around her. 'Why must one lose one's innocence to become a woman?' she wondered wistfully..


    ( Gary )

    Little did she know, but she had less than 10 seconds to live. Thousands of miles above the city, the Anu'udrian mothership launched the first of its lithium fusion missiles. The dim-witted wimpy peaceniks who pushed the Unilateral Aerospace disarmament Treaty through the congress had left Earth a defenseless target for the hostile alien empires who were determined to destroy the human race. Within two hours after the passage of the treaty
    the Anu'udrian ships were on course for Earth, carrying enough firepower to pulverize the entire planet. With no one to stop them, they swiftly initiated their diabolical plan.. The lithium fusion missile entered the atmosphere unimpeded. The President, in his top-secret mobile submarine headquarters on the ocean floor off the coast of Guam , felt the inconceivably massive explosion, which vaporized poor, stupid Laurie.



    (Rebecca)

    This is absurd. I refuse to continue this mockery of literature. My writing partner is a violent, chauvinistic semi-literate adolescent.



    ( Gary )

    Yeah? Well, my writing partner is a self-centered tedious neurotic whose attempts at writing are the literary equivalent of Valium. 'Oh, shall I have chamomile tea? Or shall I have some other sort of F**KING TEA??? Oh no, what am I to do? I'm such an air headed bimbo who reads too many Danielle Steele novels!'



    (Rebecca)

    Asshole!



    ( Gary )

    Bitch!



    (Rebecca)

    F**K YOU - YOU NEANDERTHAL!



    ( Gary )

    Go drink some tea - whore.





    (TEACHER)

    A+ I really liked this one.
     
  2. Dale

    Dale New Member

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    :D
     
  3. Mary Jane

    Mary Jane New Member

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    LOVE IT.
     
  4. Alexis

    Alexis New Member

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    Lol! (Gary wins)
     
  5. BussardNR

    BussardNR New Member

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    lmao!
     
  6. Forrest

    Forrest Really Neat

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    lol. that is classic.
     
  7. Karen

    Karen Species nut

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    Too funny.
    *waves to Candace*
     
  8. harrywitmore

    harrywitmore Member

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    That's great!
     
  9. Brant

    Brant dazed

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    which vaporized poor, stupid Laurie

    thnx 4 the morning LMAO
     
  10. xmpraedicta

    xmpraedicta Prairie angraecoid nut Supporting Member

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    I just found this hilarious gem! thanks for sharing :D
     
  11. Karen

    Karen Species nut

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    Hey, Candace!
    *waves*
     
  12. Dale

    Dale New Member

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    Bump. In case anyone missed this. Still cracks me up.
     
  13. LynneTyson

    LynneTyson New Member

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    Love love love this!
     
  14. Ignas

    Ignas Member

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    LOL! :D
     
  15. deweychop

    deweychop Almost house broken

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    LMAO!!! This is a keeper!!!
     
  16. KellyW

    KellyW Orchid wonk Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Perfect. I printed this out for my daughter. She is a community college student and will relate.
     
  17. Home Grown

    Home Grown Hakuna Matata

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    LMAO:D
     
  18. tenman

    tenman Well-Known Member

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    Hysterical! I simply must try this with another writer.